Randomville

Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
GigaBook.com
Advanced search  

News:

Pages: [1]   Go Down

Author Topic: would anyone care to give some constructive feedback?  (Read 1164 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

daytime drinking

  • City Elder
  • Posts: 1,024
would anyone care to give some constructive feedback?
« on: November 15, 2012, 12:28:50 PM »

i'm writing a short story called The man who would buy a boat.  it's six pages long right now, a few critical (imo) areas i'm struggling with.  the story's about a man who woke up one afternoon in a landfill after dying, meeting god, and being born again.  with clarity now and no money, he sets off to buy a boat.  can he do it??
Logged
poach eggs, not elephants

daytime drinking

  • City Elder
  • Posts: 1,024
Re: would anyone care to give some constructive feedback?
« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 01:54:09 AM »

well why wouldn't you want to read this?  certainly this is the proper forum for me to whore
Logged
poach eggs, not elephants

Dan

  • Tetris Master
  • City Elder
  • Posts: 12,936
Re: would anyone care to give some constructive feedback?
« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2013, 01:49:57 PM »

Well, I don't feel like someone who has any ability to give constructive feedback on a short story. That's not to say I'm not interested in reading it.
Logged
Pages: [1]   Go Up